I need my first 2 chapters review. And be honest!

Hey guys,
I need your help. I'm 2/3rds finished writing my first book. It's called "A Day With Ryan Cruise." I need you guys to read the first two chapters and tell me what you think. There FREE so won't cost you anything. It would be much appreciated. The link is here http://www.lulu.com/petalsandplaces , or click on the buy my stuff link in yellow. You can post your comments here. Just be honest. Thanks so very much! Oh, and I haven't finished editing, and the title isn't final. Any help would be great. Thanks again.